Monday, September 15, 2014

Sandeep Battula's Poem - Exploration 3

Description of Poem

My poem is about the World Trade Center.I personally like poems that feel like a Haiku or somewhat similar fashion poems. I also like to leave you where you started in terms of locations or words, that is why Towers is in the last and first lines. I had a hard time sticking to only the Petite guy so I wrote about the building in general. I describe the towers external appearances and two of the most memorable things that have happened to it, which were Philip Petite and the  2001 attacks. 
Towers by SandeepBattula

Twin Towers
Solid Concrete
Glass holes
Tall Poles
Four Buildings

A Man
A Rope
Risking, Dancing

A Plane
A Hole
Collapsing, Leaking

Shiny Glass
Concrete structure
Pointy Poles
Four buildings
Different Towers


  1. I like how your poem is organized, really cool.

  2. I really like the creativity of your poem. I also like how you describe the towers and the 2 significant events associated with the towers. Good job Sandeep!

  3. I enjoyed how short and simple your poem was. It really shows that you do not need a lot of words to get your point across.

  4. great poem! i like how you associated 9/11 in to the poem also and i really like how you did short lines with sometimes only one word. great job!


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