Monday, November 17, 2014

Comments for Andrew, Cody and Haley M.: Bonnie and Clyde

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11 comments:

  1. I thought this presentation was extremely well put together and interesting. I'd say the thing I found to be the most interesting is the story of the pictures discovered in the hideout. I thought it was pretty comical that Bonnie cared so much about the fact that people thought she smoked cigars that she went out of her way to set it straight. If i was to give constructive criticism about this presentation the only thing i think could have been improved would be to shorten it some. I think somethings were repeated and it went a little too far over 10 minutes.

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  2. I felt that the presentation was put together pretty well. The most interesting that I heard was how they let the one guy go and live, which is odd because they were known for killing most people they came in contact with. This shows that everyone does have a good side to them. Something that could have been improved on was organization and maybe rehearsing it a little more, it went kind of long and there were something's that didn't seem as important and things that were repeated.

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  3. The two of you did a fantastic job researching, organizing, and presenting your icon. I liked how you highlighted the dangerous life that they lead as part of their appeal to the people of the day. The main thing that could have been better is with time. I suspect that most people will mention that in their constructive criticisms, so I will go a slightly different rout with mine. What I think could be better is the tone. It seemed to me that you kept one tone throughout where some inflection and passion might have added an extra dimension to your presentation. Over all I thought it was one of the better presentations in total quality.

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  4. This presentation was petty sweet. I have always heard about this group growing up, but i learned so much about this couple in the presentation. I enjoyed hearing about their stories, and the presentation did a good job of showing that. The only thing I would say could be improved was how the flow of the presentation went. Well done over all though. Thanks to the presenters. I always enjoy learning something in class that goes beyond some curriculum.

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  5. I thought that this presentation was good and that you were well informed about Bonnie and Clyde. I liked how you were able give us a lot of information about them and the various things that happened in there life. I also liked your use of pictures on your power point. Some constructive criticism that I can give to you would be you seemed to jump around with what you were talking about it seemed hard for the audience.

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  6. I have heard many times about Bonnie and Clyde, but I really did not know why they were so iconic. Your presentation gave many reasons as to why they were famous. It was interesting to hear that they let two people go because they were "likeable". The length of your presentation was pretty long and seemed drug out.

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  7. This presentation was very fascinating to hear about. I've heard much about the topic of Bonnie and Clyde, but absolutely love learning more about this famous couples history. One of the facts that I found to be interesting is that because of the picture showing Bonnie with a cigar she ended up getting a nickname that she didn't much care for. I loved that in the presentation one of the thing you mentioned that made them so iconic was the strong, passionate bond they shared with one another, because I think it is definitely an important part of who they were and what makes them so iconic today. The presentation was well organized, and the only criticism I would have for the group is that you could have spoken a bit louder. Overall, it was a great presentation!

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  8. I've heard many times about Bonnie and Clyde, but not what made them so iconic so this presentation was one of my favorites because I've always wanted to learn more about this couple. I liked how you guys found pictures of them, making the audience get a feel for whar they looked like and it set the scene for your presentation. I knew that these two had an unbreakable love, but I never knew that they were that of a power couple. All the facts were very interesting. The only constructive criticism I can give is to maybe speak up more loudly and less rambling on at the end. Maybe practiced a better conclusion. Overall though, great job!

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  9. I have always heard about Bonnie & Clyde, but never knew who they were and what they did ( I thought they were made up characters). So I learned the basic history about Bonnie & Clyde for this presentation. They focused a lot more on Clyde rather than Bonnie.

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  10. This presentation was so interesting! I liked how you showed pictures of Bonnie and Clyde. Also liked how you gave information about how Bonnie and Clyde met and various facts and information about both Bonnie and Clyde. It was really interesting how they spared two people's lives after they had their killing spree. One piece of criticism i would give is to speak up. Overall though great presentation.

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  11. I really loved learning about Bonnie and Clyde they were a very interesting couple. The presentation was very informative but seemed rushed.

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