| Description of Poem My poem is about the World Trade Center.I personally like poems that feel like a Haiku or somewhat similar fashion poems. I also like to leave you where you started in terms of locations or words, that is why Towers is in the last and first lines. I had a hard time sticking to only the Petite guy so I wrote about the building in general. I describe the towers external appearances and two of the most memorable things that have happened to it, which were Philip Petite and the 2001 attacks. |
Towers by SandeepBattula
Twin Towers
Solid Concrete
Glass holes
Tall Poles
Four Buildings
A Man
A Rope
Risking, Dancing
Entertaining
A Plane
A Hole
Collapsing, Leaking
Killing
Shiny Glass
Concrete structure
Pointy Poles
Four buildings
Different Towers
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Monday, September 15, 2014
Sandeep Battula's Poem - Exploration 3
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I like how your poem is organized, really cool.
ReplyDeleteI really like the creativity of your poem. I also like how you describe the towers and the 2 significant events associated with the towers. Good job Sandeep!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed how short and simple your poem was. It really shows that you do not need a lot of words to get your point across.
ReplyDeletegreat poem! i like how you associated 9/11 in to the poem also and i really like how you did short lines with sometimes only one word. great job!
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