Man on a wire
Man on a wire, Man on a wire
it seemed like his situation was dire.
He had taken on a great and frightening trial
and did it all while sporting a smile.
Eight times he walked across the sky,
Philipe must have felt he could fly.
He laid down on the wire and began to roll
its a miracle he never lost control!
Eight long months he slaved and he toiled
all the time claiming "My dream won't be foiled!"
and as he walked, the crowds began to cheer,
for the man who showed no fear
As he stepped down, his journey was ended
and at once he was apprehended.
The charges were soon dropped
for the man who never flopped
and so completes the dream, that couldn't be stopped.
Hey, Jacob nice job on the rhyming.
ReplyDeleteI like poems that rhyme so nice job, but I also like how your poem flows. It's like I could sing it if I wanted to(if that makes sense). I also really like how you included dialogue in there which I think with poetry can be a little difficult.
ReplyDeleteThe rhyming in your poem is great! I had a lot of trouble with the rhyming, so I did not use it.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was great to read. I loved that it rhymed, but it also was fun to read because each stanza had a playful yet serious vibe to it and holds the readers interest with each line.
ReplyDeleteThis is another poem which uses the generic AB rhyme scheme. However, the way that you used the rhyme scheme truly added a sense of flow and meaning into the poem. This allows the reader to feel the enthusiasm and tension Petite had on his journey to complete the impossible.
ReplyDeleteI like the rhyme sceme. It flowed well and made sence. Very cool to read.
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