tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8043988036105797404.post3336245967072583802..comments2014-12-11T20:33:46.869-08:00Comments on (3 p.m.) Blogging to Learn and Share : Philippe Petite Poem - Andrew BalsigerMike Lohrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8043988036105797404.post-71124260846573163122014-09-15T12:23:48.234-07:002014-09-15T12:23:48.234-07:00I love the rhythm that comes along with your poem....I love the rhythm that comes along with your poem. It makes it MUCH more easier to read, and adds to the flow of the poem.Lorenzo Palmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04256325871510123707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8043988036105797404.post-23147220166275634992014-09-15T09:28:56.868-07:002014-09-15T09:28:56.868-07:00wow, your poem is really good! I love poems that r...wow, your poem is really good! I love poems that rhyme and I know it's difficult to do(I had trouble with mine). You also got a lot of info into yours about what happened. Nicely done! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00268332103927784978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8043988036105797404.post-13464256107403290522014-09-15T07:32:55.885-07:002014-09-15T07:32:55.885-07:00I like how you were able to effectively use rhymin...I like how you were able to effectively use rhyming in this poem. Your use of rhyming really helps the events that go on in it to stand out from each other.<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14875378476541963793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8043988036105797404.post-29586027565780108722014-09-14T19:35:18.776-07:002014-09-14T19:35:18.776-07:00This poem is really good! I loved the rhyming in y...This poem is really good! I loved the rhyming in your poem! I cannot rhyme to save my life so I am really fascinated by how you could rhyme and have it still contribute with the event! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09975078492077005294noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8043988036105797404.post-66211233888174730042014-09-14T11:49:39.301-07:002014-09-14T11:49:39.301-07:00I LOVE your poem! I think that the rhyming scheme ...I LOVE your poem! I think that the rhyming scheme AB which usually is generic, fits your poem perfectly bringing to life the story of Philippe Petite and giving it a comedic Doctor Seuss feel. When I was reading it I was almost racking my brain for a nursery rhyme to match your poem to lol. All around, good work!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12283578963602442360noreply@blogger.com